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第一、基本結(jié)構(gòu)
以介紹方法、步驟為主要結(jié)構(gòu)的文章一般分成兩個(gè)部分。第一部分闡明這些方法的重要性,第二部分具體介紹這些方法。在五段作文中一般由引言段處理第一部分的內(nèi)容,正文部分依次介紹方法。其基本結(jié)構(gòu)如下:
The reason for introducing the ways
Specific way I
Specific way Ⅱ
Specific way Ⅲ
Conclusion
請看下面一篇關(guān)于如何減肥的文章。一開頭就借助社會上流行的減肥熱,引出其重要性,然后就很自然地介紹減肥瘦身的方法。
Lose Weight
1) At times, it seems that almost everybody I know is desperately trying to lose weight. It is good, for overweight not only spoils your image but affects your health as well. But except a lucky few, most fail. Is there any diet to slim down and stay thin? Weight-control authorities tell us a successful diet takes place more in your mind than at the table.Here are ways:(在引出主題后,先說明減肥的重要性,然后順勢提出如何做,進(jìn)入正文)
2) Work on your body image.(主題句)No one can become thin who doesn't believe that he can be thin. Your body image is the you that you identify with,either consciously or unconsciously. If you really want to reduce, you should have a definite idea of how thin you want to be. Picture your new body image often, vividly and graphically.That will serve a blueprint for change.(方法一:腦子里有具體的形象有助于瘦身)
3)Never surrender.(主題句)Successful reducing has more to do with devotion and, perhaps, an uncompromising personality. Some people try this or that diet, but soon stop because "it didn't work" or "it made me uncomfortable". If successful dieters share anything else, it is unrelenting drive to succeed. In most cases it is not a particular diet but will power that really counts.(方法二:要有堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的毅力)
4) Set achievable goals.(主題句)Unsuccessful dieters often fail because they set overly ambitious goals for themselves. For example, "I'm going to lose 30 pounds before I'm married." This kind of state of mind only invites discouragement if they fail. Set a reasonable and manageable sub-goal. Once you've achieved it, you'll find it easier to go on to the next. Success breeds success!(方法三:確定合適的減肥目標(biāo))
5) Reducing is not just a matter of clipping a diet out of magazines. You may try medicines, eat less, and take exercise. No matter what kind of diet you choose, remember that losing weight begins with a state of mind.(結(jié)尾回到文章開始的中心思想句)
閃光點(diǎn):
1. 首尾呼應(yīng):A successful diet takes place more in your mind than at the table.-No matter what kind of diet you cheose, remember that losing weight begin with a state of mind.
2. 用詞變化:lose weight—reducing—weight control
3. 詞匯亮點(diǎn): identify with,serve a blueprint,uncompromising personality, unrelenting drive,set goals
顯然這種結(jié)構(gòu)的文章一般直接跟讀者說話,用“you”稱呼,這樣拉近與讀者的距離就顯得親切些。其另一特點(diǎn)是:一般采用祈使句。
第二、方法結(jié)構(gòu)句型
1) Here, according to doctors/scientists, are the secrets/ways of .
2) Here are five pieces of advice that help you ….
3) After all, the secrets of .…. are not secrets. You can learn and master them and become.
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